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Friday, 17 October 2014

100 Word Challenge

...I Could Not Believe The Smell...

My lungs are smouldering, my nose is swelling up,it's impossible to breathe. The horrendous stench is melting my insides. I could not believe the smell. It smells like a thousand ogres that haven't bathed in 999,999,999 years. I'm watching everybody around me slowly faint. The grass is turning brown faster than the speed of light. Leaves are plummeting off the trees,straight to the ground instead of drifting. I ventured closer to the stench. The stench became even more repulsive. It appeared to be coming from the public toilets, so that's where I headed. I carefully unlocked the door. Only to find the culprit was........

Wednesday, 24 September 2014

CAPTAIN TORY NARRATIVE

Part 1

Have you ever had a time when you wished secrets weren't secrets? I have and I almost died because of it.

It was extremely foggy, not only was I invisible in that fog but I am also extremely short making it even harder to see anything. But one thing I could tell was that my brand new schooner was acting strange. I looked over my shoulder and there I saw him...Just standing there....With a lantern... Swinging it.... Every three swings my schooner went psyco I thought this must be the answer.

"H-h-h-h-h-h-e-e-e-e-l-l-l-l-o-o-o," I'm trembling as I speak."M-my name's Tommy THAT LANTERN It's magic, it makes my."

"SHHHHHHHHHH, .don't say anything,it could end the world if used in the wrong hands."

"IT COULD!"

"Yes,yes it could."

"May I ask,what's your name?"

"Tory,Captain Tory!"

"Can I see how that lantern works?"

"Sure!"

He swung his lantern three times,and slowly the schooner appeared,he did it again but this time it disappeared.He did it again but.............THE LANTERN RAN OUT OF JUICE!!! "Uh Tommy."

"I know, how do we fix it?"

" humph, come with me."

3-7-2-9-Q-Z-2

"We're in my boy,don't touch anything."

"Why?"

"Never mind that because here is the juice for the lantern,we'll we're all loaded ready to go?"

"Hurry up!"

"What how'd you get there?"

"Because I'm quick!"

"Where'd the lantern go?"

"That guy has it!"

"Uh Oh,STOP HIM!"

Part 2

The two heroes chased and weaves until finally they caught up with the person that they were after. They cornered him and ran at him.Then tommy snatched the lantern and swung it three times.He peered over the hill and there he saw....